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More spray paint.
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This piece is extremely complex and beautiful. The first thing that strikes me with this one is the extremely detailed effects of the water splashing at the bottom of the waterfalls. The water at the bottom of the piece is also very well done - consistent, beautiful, deep colors and holds a true liquid-like texture.

The other striking part of this picture is the lines drawn just above the water, the white lines that create the landscape - I find it extremely interesting that you've chosen to make the actual 'land' this dark. It provides an excellent contribution to the surreal, dark and gloomy feeling of this piece. However, just under the center-most white tree, the land seems to be missing a bit of its texture, and it takes away from the piece as a whole, I believe.

The white trees, I would have to admit, are my least liked part of this piece. While they offer great contrast to the rest of the scene, the outlines of the branches seem to be missing a property of solidity. I believe that if the trees were given a solid, rigid appearance, it would provide a nice contrast to the rest of the scene, which is very fluid in comparison.

The moons in the scene are great in that they are very in your face, they aren't afraid to take over 30% of the whole piece and provide a center focus, while being slightly off the center of the picture itself. The foreground moon is very well textured, and I especially like the shadow on its underbelly.

The final thing I'll mention about this photo is that I believe it lacks a little bit of the '3D' quality that you employ in other pieces. It seems flatter than the piece deserves, given all of the focus points and different levels of landscape.

Overall this is another excellent piece in a very skilled medium that you have a lot of talent in. I've never seen such an amazing type of art, and I'm really happy to be able to critique these. :) Great work!
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CASIO COMPUTER CO.,LTD.
EX-Z60
1/20 second
F/3.6
8 mm
Jan 21, 2006, 4:49:06 AM

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